The edits for the SWEEP OF THE BLADE landed. Oy. Need to think deep thoughts about how to fix things.
We are working on a short unspecified once-trunked project, so it’s going to be edits for half a day and writing for another, peppered with such glorious conversations as the one yesterday.
Gordon: He sounds like an idiot.
Me: Yes. I feel like it doesn’t really match.
Gordon: Mhm. He needs to be menacing and sharp.
Me: We could delete the entire dialogue and just start over. It would be easier than line by line.
Gordon, pressing delete key.
So I have no content for you today. Instead I present to you The Hunt, a saga in three parts. Olde English Bulldogge is a sly and cunning huntress, anticipating the movements of her prey.